After reviewing my peer’s comments I am a lot more confident about my free draft. It seemed challenging to put my ideas into a coherent essay at first, but it appears like I did an alright job. That being said, I still have my work cut out for me. First, I have to add my other modes into my essay. While I have outlined where I am going to use them, I have to pick the right pictures and songs I want to use. Second, I want to focus my argument and claim sentences to support what I actually want to talk about. While I do have decent claim sentences, they aren’t exactly what I’m trying to say. Lastly, there are minor tasks to attend to such as grammar, quotes, and citations. After I accomplish all of this I feel like I’ll be in good shape. However my biggest challenge will most likely be focusing my claim sentences. While I know what I want to say, it feels difficult to actually articulate these thoughts. But with some focused thought I should be able to over come this challenge. If I can’t overcome these challenges on my own, I’m sure i can return to my peers, or teacher, to help me brainstorm some ideas. Overall, I like where I am right now and feel confident approaching this final stretch of my paper.